Fantasy Beta Reading

Fantasy Beta Reader

Detailed, actionable feedback on your fantasy manuscript. Plot, pacing, character arcs, world-building, magic systems—everything that makes fantasy sing.

What's included in your report

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Plot & Structure

Full story arc analysis, pacing notes, and structural feedback.

👥

Character Development

Character arcs, consistency, motivation, and emotional resonance.

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World-Building

Internal consistency, immersion, and logic gaps.

Magic Systems

Rules, costs, consistency, and how they serve the story.

🎙️

Voice & Prose

Writing style, tone, readability, and distinctive voice.

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Actionable Next Steps

Clear, prioritized revision suggestions you can act on.

Frequently asked questions

How long does it take?
Turnaround depends on word count. Up to 10k words: 3 days. Up to 50k: 7 days. Up to 100k: 14 days.
Do you read all fantasy subgenres?
Yes! Epic fantasy, contemporary fantasy, romantasy, high/low fantasy, cozy fantasy, magical realism—I read it all.
Do you read YA fantasy?
Absolutely. I read both adult and YA fantasy with equal care and attention.
What if I need revisions?
Standard and Deep Dive packages include one round of revisions.
How do I book?
Choose your package below, click Pay & Book, and complete secure checkout with Stripe. You can also book via Fiverr.

Choose your package

Basic

Short Story

Up to 10,000 words

HKD 123.31

  • ✓ Reader report
  • ✓ 3-day delivery
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Standard

Novel

Up to 50,000 words

HKD 287.71

  • ✓ Reader report
  • ✓ 7-day delivery
  • ✓ 1 revision
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Deep Dive

Full Novel

Up to 100,000 words

HKD 452.12

  • ✓ Reader report
  • ✓ 14-day delivery
  • ✓ 1 revision
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